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Big Grin
Triumphwas about freakin time,eh?
ok
so i was being extra critical for this,so here it goes,ill have critiques of each piece of art on the bottom
Q.S
Although its not the first time ive heard about the "Angel Judge" concept and i believe you could have made Q.S a bit tougher,"her" easy-going nature is expressed Throughout the pic,with "her" posture and her clothing which isnt regular "angel clothing".But i did think the katana was a bit off compared to her outfit.Overall it shows you put thought into this.
THITA
I absolutely love the detail you put into his outfit,BUUUT,a little birdy told me those wings are similar to the wings of some angels in a certain online game,correct?Anyway,you dont directly mention anything about his personality,instead you hint several things with the BG story.About his story,it gets a thumbs up.Nicely thought.BUUUT(second but) you didnt colour.That did have consequences.
EZEKIEL
To start off,Ez is a very pretty boy whose wrapped wings i really liked.A first look at his story made me go "bawwww",looking at it carefully though,there were some things that werent right.First,his crime wasnt as serious as to be immediately sentenced to hell,and i doubt they(whoever you may imply) would be as cruel secondly,after Ez finishes his sentence he is released only to go toward the road to committing his "crime" again?Now,you know how that sounds?Also, changing the entry pic wont change much since there isnt much clothing on him in either pics.
FREYA
Im sure im not the only one who believes that Freyas design is absolutely stunning,Amazing. Very detailed,shows you put effort into it.Shes also pretty when using her neon blue powers too.But then comes the story.Honestly speaking,it didnt excite me.Stories about characters losing their memories but having some sort of cool power isnt something i havent heared before.Also you could have added some kind of quirk to her personality,to spice her up a bit instead of making her just another angelic character.
ALAYA
Im curious where you found her name from...its very unique.Her overall design is ok and the broken halo,i especially like but i think you could have developed her a bit more.Added more of a BG sory ,also im confused with her personality.You dont say much.Shes innocent yet an anti-hero?
LUNE CLAIR
Ok,so its obvious story telling isnt your strong point.Your story was scrabbled.In the end(after things cleared up) i thought her story was rather intriguing and with a certain touch of darkness although that isnt shown at all in the pic.Lune Clair is more of a misguided child than an evil angel.You could have made her smile devilishly.Her outfit i loved.Very sweet and angelic and ive never seen wings like those before...
KIRA
I think you could have developed her more,plus you could have done something more original than a brunette with a blue dress.You did have a concept going on though with the light and colours thing,but you could have done more developing
SO FINALLY AFTER I TIRED YOU GUYS AND SPRAYED YOU ALL WITH MY MEAN STRAIGHTFORWARDNESS!!!!
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TA-TA-TA-RAAAAANNN!!!!!!!!!!
~WINNERS~
~FIRST PLACE~
with Q.S~SECOND PLACE~
with Lune Clair~THIRD PLACE~
with Thitawinners amy send me a note for the requests and things concerning the prizes,or comment i dun mind either way
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~PRIZES~
~1ST PLACE
1 full coloured pic of their angel(traditional)
1 full coloured requested pic(traditional PROBABLY)
1 comic with their character(probly a short funni one)
1 surprise (that is a secret...)
~2ND PLACE
1 full coloured requested pic
1 coloured pic of their angel OR anything else they want(with maybe a little BG )
1 surprise
~3RD PLACE
1 requested pic of a character(no bachground)
1 coloured pic of their angel(no BG
1 surprise
Apprehensive
Pride
